Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this technological advanced world, advertisements are an effective method to promote a new product in the competitive market. Therefore, some people tend to purchase certain unnecessary products by influencing from these lucrative adverts.
While there are certain demographics of the society who hold the different opinion that advertisements made their life easy by introducing new features of the products with the click of a button. However, I accede with former viewpoint and this essay will support this argument with the examples of various promotion strategies, which big companies adopt to increase their sale by attracting customers.
It is human tendency to buy products at effective cost. Therefore, several brands launch their goods in the market at discounted rate. This strategic approach not only benefits the manufacturers in the sale of a product but beat their corrivals as well. For instance, Fog deodorant, when first launched in India came up with an offer of buy one get one free. Though people didn't have primary need of body mist but they purchased the product and addicted to the fragrance because of the offer they were attracted to. Nowadays, Fog is one of the top rated fragrances in India due to its maximum sale.
Prominent brands pay a fortune to celebrities and superstars to promote their products and services, which influence their followers and they stock up unwanted goods while shopping. To support this statement, I am mentioning the example of energy drink Red Bull being promoted by Virat Kohli, the Indian cricketer. Consumers of this drink accept that they drink Red Bull not because of the instant energy and the taste it offers but for Virat's promotion. Thus, these instances substantiate that one-third of the consumers pay for needless goods because of these advertisements.
By hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying that most of the advertisements are designed to attract customers and they can't resist themselves from buying unwanted items.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, third, thus, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25155279503 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86608948977 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5213149164 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.733333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140842904739 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461456052719 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360585675866 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868548351658 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359199271953 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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