Something in an airport delayed you and you missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport’s customer service department.in your letter include:
• What delayed you?
• How missing this flight affect you?
• What would you like the airport to do about this issue?
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express sheer disappointment with respect to delay in luggage checking, which made me miss my flight.
I expected to reach Goa by Jet Airways, flight number 'ABZ120' and reached the airport on time to get the baggage formalities done. There was a big queue and there were many passengers before me. When my turn came, it was almost very late and they felt something suspicious in bag. The officer asked me to unpack my items for further inquiry. The bag was tightly packed and I had to unload all the items. although nothing was found, I had face great trouble and could not re-pack the bag on time. Consequently, this made me miss the flight.
Unfortunately, I could not reach to the important meeting in Goa and the work was affected. The clients left unhappy and this incident made great loss to the company.
I am quite sure that such thing would have not occured if the airport authorities would have adequately manage the queue. Admittedly, if my bag was checked early, I would have packed my items on time. The loss incurred could not be compensated but I would expect full refund to flight tickets.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to express sheer disappoint...
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Suggestion: There
...ime to get the baggage formalities done.There was a big queue and there were many pas...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...cked and I had to unload all the items. although nothing was found, I had face great tro...
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Line 8, column 105, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'managed'.
Suggestion: managed
...rport authorities would have adequately manage the queue. Admittedly, if my bag was ch...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
..., I would have packed my items on time. although the loss incurred could not be compensa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you. Yours faithfully, XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75355450237 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56907012187 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616113744076 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7328725714 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6428571429 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151277065024 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515195572816 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512956412282 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854485406013 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463563643739 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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