In many countries, people are earning more these days, they are also spending money in buying more and more items. Do you think, it is positive or negative development?
According to the press release from the Ministry of Trades USA, the Business revenue generated from Christmas holidays this year is ten percent greater than the last year. This is because, with the rise of average income of the people, their overall expenditures have also increased in many countries. In my opinion, it Is a favorable phenomenon.
To begin with, the large overall spending on buying products by general public would be beneficial for the country’s economy. If people consume all their earning’s, the money will circulate in the market. In this way, the business activity will increase and hence the country will become economically stronger. Switzerland would be the best example in this case, where people’s average per capita income is almost equal to their average expenditures, which is one of the causes of the growth of this country.
In addition to this, when people purchase more good, the bargaining power of the nation as a whole will also increase. This ability of the people, would attract international merchants and brands to sell their products in this country. In this way, their businesses will become dependent upon the people. As a result, the public would be able to control the prices of the brands. For example, the major portion of China’s products is sold in India, that is why Chinese products are cheaper in India as compared to any other parts of the world.
To conclude, the increase in the spending by the people is beneficial for the growth of country and the nation. In future, many other countries will also encourage their public to spend more instead of saving money in their lockers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, for example, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71089872567 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538181818182 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3874796211 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12629716194 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483434180792 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629483245976 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912301388576 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616343430179 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.