In countries throughout the world, students are required to study history in school. Why is history considered an important school subject? Provide two or three reasons and support your ideas with examples.
Most of the nations around the world prioritize history as an important part of student’s formation. In fact, just a few countries don’t think that teaching history in school is not helpful at all. Then, I would argue that this subject is tremendously relevant for everyone, specially because of all experiences that might be shared with the school goers about what happened in the world in the past.
Certainly, history is knowledge that can show our kids an incredible range of facts about our political beliefs and choices in the past that could help them to avoid the same mistakes in the next challenges. For instance, the German political choices in the past that led Adolf Hitler to presidency began after a specific philosophy been spread among the population. Then, if our students learn about this, they will be surely well prepared to avoid these ideas growing again.
In addition to this, I would say that the cultural behaviors that are nowadays causing issues to our society might be well explained by all the information that historians can learn and teach us. Indeed, questions about our past , about the cultures from people who came before us and even knowing better about our previous behaviors are useful to strengthen our identity as a people. For example, historic researches could present to Brazilian society all African and Europeans cultural backgrounds that can guide our understanding about our selves to some deeper comprehension.
Therefore, in my point of view, all nations should incentivize their schools to invest time and resources in history teaching for kids. This would be incredibly relevant for this culture and identity as a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...past that led Adolf Hitler to presidency began after a specific philosophy been s...
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...ach us. Indeed, questions about our past , about the cultures from people who came...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1119133574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64118934679 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602888086643 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.782092569 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129763321959 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612691387 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680325754654 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967239364526 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940207445746 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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