۱- Which one do you prefer? Why?
– a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or
– another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days
In today's competitive world, companies are trying hard to provide more interesting job offering for employees. some companies come up by a job which is challenging with low number of vacation day, but other companies offer differently. Choosing which situation is more beneficial is highly depended on the goals and the characteristic of a person. personally, I would prefer to attain a job with more vacation days instead of challenging projects. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I explore in the following essay.
First aspect to consider is that having more days off would led people to spend more time with their friends and family. Today people are so busy and hardly can find an proper time for visiting their family and all people they care about. For example, my sister works in a computer company four day a week. Also she is far away from us but she has kept her connection with us and comes and visit us frequently. She always tells me that having more vacation days have brought her number of benefits. She explains that, due to spending more time with us, her level of stress had been dropped significantly and she can work more efficiently at work compare to her co-worker who do not have much free days as my sister has. Therefor, according to my sister experience, I feel that having more free time and vacation is my preference.
Second, by having more time out of work, people can save more money and help to keep their surrounding environment cleaner. majority of People now use their private car in order to commute between their house and their work. cars use fossil fuels as their source of energy, which produce harmful gases, that are really dangerous for people, animals and environment. beside, fuel like gasoline and oil which car burn, are highly expensive in our county. by having more vacation days, for example four-days work, people would be capable of saving more money due to the fact that they do not have to pay money for fuel and less amount of gases would be produced. For example, months ago, our government decided to forec all the companies in our city to reduce work days to four instead of five to reduce the amount of green house gases. Even my father's company was forced to do the rule, so my father worked less than before. after a while, every body could noticed the changes in which the wather had become cleaner and healthier for people. In addition my father saved more money during that period and he was able to pay his load faster. so I think having more days off is beneficial for both financial situation of people and environment.
In sum, I am a fan of more vacation days instead of more challenging project. offering a job with more vacation would provide people valuable chance for visiting their family and spending more time with them. In addition, people will save more money and it is helpful for keeping the environment healthier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, while, as for, for example, i feel, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2399.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 510.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70392156863 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44655364946 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498039215686 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.9 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2156651188 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.96 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27614217711 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946157348954 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983913021682 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223935795832 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121970677454 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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