You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,• describe the si

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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

family: "Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",helvetica,verdana,arial,sans-serif; font-size: 17.6px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: 29.04px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px;">Dear,
Kammy
family: "Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",helvetica,verdana,arial,sans-serif; font-size: 17.6px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: 29.04px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px;">I hope you will be quite well. I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the magnificent dinner with you.
family: "Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",helvetica,verdana,arial,sans-serif; font-size: 17.6px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: 29.04px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px;">It was a great day at your house.I was delighted to taste toothsome food which was enriched with nutritional values. I could not come to come to know about your exceptional culinary skill if you had not invited.Apart from the food, your whole family is amiable.It did'nt seem that i was meeting them first time. I was rejoiced to met you all.
family: "Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",helvetica,verdana,arial,sans-serif; font-size: 17.6px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: 29.04px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px;">Moreover, you have an elegant house with marvelous interior. The infrastructure is fabulous.I want to thanks you once again for making my visit memorable.
family: "Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",helvetica,verdana,arial,sans-serif; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; height: 17.92px; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; width: 986.08px; word-spacing: 0px;">

family: "Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",helvetica,verdana,arial,sans-serif; font-size: 17.6px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: 29.04px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px;">Looking forward for your visit at my place in coming vacations.Please pass my regards to your family members.
I am waiting eagerly to know about you.
family: "Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",helvetica,verdana,arial,sans-serif; font-size: 17.6px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: 29.04px; margin-bottom: 10px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-decoration: none; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px;">Warm wishes,
Hazal

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3670.0 937.175257732 392% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 414.0 206.0 201% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.86473429952 4.54256449028 195% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 3.78020617076 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.43884963768 2.54303337028 293% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.328502415459 0.622605031667 53% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 862.2 290.88556701 296% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.41237113402 149% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 16.3608247423 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 358.000782122 44.8134815571 799% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 367.0 76.5299724578 480% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.4 16.8248392259 246% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 2.54639175258 1374% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0471179874192 0.216113520407 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712550842325 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633270601738 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474884549919 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357490183209 0.0580467560999 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.0 8.37731958763 489% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.44 70.7449484536 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 3.82989690722 415% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 7.45979381443 338% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 35.0 8.71597938144 402% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 8.62886597938 382% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 8.54432989691 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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