Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.
Having an efficient system for recycling is a prerequisite to have a clean environment. Undoubtedly, the starting point would be households that separate their waste based on recycling principles. For achieving this
First of all, human being as a social creature needs to be disciplined otherwise we would face with a chaos. In terms of recycling, in the absence of one unified code accomplishment of a promising waste management would be impossible. Because each individual prefers to dump their trashes according to their discretion which is not necessarily the same as the ideal one. In contrast, governments relying upon its authority and using reward and punishment method would exercise the best pattern of recycling for all people in society.
Additionally, mere governmental intervention in the form of acting laws could not guarantee growing of recycling. In fact, both history and experiential evidences shows that if people do not believe in something they do not do that despite having strict and severe laws. Therefore, citizens should be well-informed about benefits of separating their waste and be alert around consequences of bad management of trashes. This strategy would be applied through media such as TV, newspapers, and social networks by inviting experts to clarify the aspect of the issue.
To conclude, in my opinion not only governments should enact laws to increase recycling but also people`s knowledge should be raised by media. goal, it is said that governments should be involved by enacting laws. I agree with this proposition and believe that in addition to that people should be taught.
- Average carbon dioxide emissions per person, 1967-2007 84
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in contrast, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32170542636 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04489621254 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62015503876 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4894277687 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185965277933 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657971285695 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489582852017 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116823111555 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178359460931 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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