The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel.
To what consequences may overpopulation lead?
In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation
The planet’s population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel.
To what consequences may overpopulation lead?
Uncontrolled growth of human beings, as believed by many, is causing shortfall of reserves such as food, water and oil. In my opinion, I strongly opine that increase in number of people on earth will have severe consequences. In this essay, we will discuss the possible consequences of overpopulation and plausible solutions to overcome it.
Firstly, with regard to repercussions of overcrowded planet, a lot of communicable and prolonged diseases will result from over population. Also, events of natural disasters are bound to increase in number. When large number of people share a living space then chance of spreading communicable diseases happens to rise and it gets difficult to remove the root cause and save others. Furthermore, number of natural disasters increase sporadically which leads to damage to people and property. One such instance happened in India when tsunami caused heavy loss to coastal people by taking lives of thousands and destructed property worth rupees 10 million.
Looking forward to solutions to avoid such disasters and save mother earth, government should adopt policies like one child policy of China where couples were allowed to give birth to only single child in order to avail government benefits. This helped China control their population and save on the assets for future generation. Also, awareness campaign should be held at town level to make every individual aware of his actions and outcomes. Value of saving resources to sustain our world should be taught in schools, offices and other public institutions.
To sum up, I would say that what we have got from ancestors should be saved for our successors and should not deplete it in our carelessness. To bring out the change individuals have to join hands and government should come in support of such people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30817610063 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88286410069 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632075471698 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4480652619 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226761602549 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853436749256 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137489857448 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188852258298 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182194985067 0.056905535591 320% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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