Many more people travel nowadays than in the past. What impact does this increase in tourism have on the countries that they visit?
In recent years the tourism industry has significant growth worldwide and have several effects on host countries.
In many countries, visitors have several negative effects on host countries. In many cases, tourists destroy the environment in host countries, especially in virgin environmental areas in that they not enough take care about protecting the environment. For instance, when some adventure tourist goes to the forest and they harm plants and animals territories. In addition, many tourists affect conservatism cultures. For example, when some foreign visitors go to some rural areas, they have different behavior and collection that are totally new for native people and it might affect on youngest natives to follow their behavior or collections.
Many countries are totally warm welcoming to tourist because they can earn a lot of money from them. Moreover, host countries try to establish new attraction such as new hotels and tourist areas to absorb them to their countries. In addition, the tourism industry has a major effect on employment in that they can increase their employment in many direct and indirect jobs. For example, someones work in hotels or work in a transportation system are related to directly tourists. Moreover, some jobs like building workers who work to build new hotels or some constriction are indirectly related to tourist.
Although tourists have negative effects on host countries such as cultural impact or destroying the environment, visitors have more benefits for countries that attract new visitors to their countries to increase their revenues and employment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ral negative effects on host countries. In many cases, tourists destroy the enviro...
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Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ally new for native people and it might affect on youngest natives to follow their behavi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.492 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8463843732 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8786573907 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.416666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179424964593 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693516335768 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527920218104 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11889255906 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430850332678 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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