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This supposed to be a great day, but it was not. I planned to go to countryside with my last crush,
an exotic girl from Paraguay that even talked Guarani language, a feature that I loved, I do not
why. Everything seemed perfect for us, the weather forecast had announced blue sky and
sunshine all day long, but as soon as we left Santiago behind, the weather was getting worse and
darker. Big clouds were covering the sky drawing a sensation that something bad could happen
any time.
When we reached to San Fernando a big storm started, full of thunders, lightning and heavy rain.
It was so intense that we had to stop our way and park in a Gas Station until the storm ends. We
ran out of the car and stayed at the Station Shop during the storm, But, instead of stop, the storm
increased its power and two tornadoes hitted the road and the village next to the Gas Station. The
wind was brutally strong and we saw how leafs, branches and even pieces of roof’s houses fly over
the area. It was a horrific feeling, we could not go out, because we were in danger of being
seriously injured by those flying elements. In fright for a long time, we just waited for the moment
that tornadoes disappear and finally, when that happened, we just were able to go back to our
car, and quickly drove back to Santiago, muddling through a flooding highway.
When we backed home, we realized what we had witnessed and we agree that this was a
memorable day because of bad luck and bad weather together. Definitely, not the best day for a
date, but a day to be told to your grandchild.
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| 2018-09-18 | Syed Farooq Shah | 55 | view |
- Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 76
- A new acquaintance of yours is thinking about studying your native language. How would you convince him or her that this would be a good decision? Use specific reasons and details in your response. 61
- comics 40
- comics 66
- comics 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48122866894 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34260503363 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597269624573 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.487592896 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.416666667 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.45110844103 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.53405017921 375% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 58.1214874552 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.2 Out of 6.0
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.