Some people like to do only what they already do well Other people prefer to try new things and take risks Which one do you prefer

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Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which one do you prefer?

Trying different sort of activities is a part of human nature as they find it interesting.However ,there are some people who love to do only those activities in which they are well, but other prefer to do wide range of new activities by putting their lives in danger.I prefer the former view.

To begin with ,those people who used to do same thing again and again are more comfortable in their own activity area as they have more knowledge or experience about it.To be exemplified ,many professionals such as doctors, engineers and teachers are perfect in their own job ,if they try other profession ,they will not become successful.

Furthermore ,trying new things sometimes put bad influence on personality development due to the lack of self-esteem to get success. Moreover ,taking risks may prove perilous to one's life.For instance ,some people find adventurous sports or games interesting ,but their body or mind is not capable of doing it due to less body stamina ,still they try it without considering the consequences. Eventually ,they harm themselves by injuries and wounds.

To end, a person should try those activities in which he or she is comfortable.If one does something out of his comfort zone, they should consider the results first before doing it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, for instance, sort of, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14218009479 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91749181593 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672985781991 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.2735261461 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.833333333 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1666666667 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.1666666667 7.06120827912 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3729228417 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159411128047 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10784845345 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215434148653 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942295518278 0.056905535591 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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