Task 2: Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
People have different views about their children should be taken care by family members like grandparents or the babysitters in childcare centres while they have working. Although there are some benefits if they gave the children to centres, I still believe their grandparent is able to take care of them well.
It may be true that childcare centres can be seen an ideal place for a child. We cannot deny that the babysitters are kind of person who were trained professionally, therefore they have qualification about taking care of the children. They know what a child need, or they will do anything that is best for a child. In addition to this, children will have opportunity to meet and have new friends at centre. Living with other friends is useful for the development of their spirit as well as starting for the formation of social skills.
On the other hand, I think that the children will receive the best care from their grandparents. Grandparents would have the experience from nourish their child, so they are likely to know the way to nurture their grandchildren. More importantly, they really love them so much, so they tend to try their best to take care the children as well as possible. Certainly, they are able to remain the patient as well as the tenderness with their child. That is so important especially nowadays, many centres are accused of having the violence with the children. Therefore, give the children to their grandparent is a way to avoid the bad situation like that.
In conclusion, despite the advantages of childcare centres, I agree that their grandparent always the most suitable person which could take care of the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, still, therefore, well, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89752650177 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73064182011 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519434628975 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9203875616 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318320537752 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119783069024 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809951935195 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211307336109 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874683831198 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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