A Friend has written to you asking for advice about the problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. write a reply to your friend in your letter.
Dear Friend,
I am happy to see a letter received from you after a long time. It's being long time, we was not in touch after we left the previous organisation. I am also happy to hear about you that, you have join a multination company which is currently leading and have a famous brand in FMCG segment. I must share with you my feeling about our previous organisation that, our previous organisation was not so much advance but the learning technique was very good. In the Previous organisation we were never felt about any corporate culture and our senior was also so supportive. I understand that due to the advance atmosphere and professional culture it is difficult in the intial phase to adjust in to a new organisation. As we were never seen this type of culture in our previous organisation so we always find it as a new and feel little unconfortable.
I am happy to share with you my experience from the date of joining to till date in my new organisation. My new organisation are much more advance than our previous organisation and becuase of that in the intial phase it was very much difficult for me to adjust in the advance atmoshpere. In the initially I felt to leave the organisation, My moral was so down and I was moving towards depression. At once I also thought that the changing of a job was a good decision or not. But Slowly and steadily and with the help of my other office collegue and office seniors, now I am gel with the organisation culture. One day I was sitting on my chair and was in deep thinking about my decision for moving in to a new organisation was right or wrong, suddenly one of my senior collegue notice me that I look little depressed and in a sad mood so he came near to me and set in to the chair which was next to me. He ask me about my problem and as he was the first person whom I met in my new organisation, I was comfortable with him to share my feeling. Then he guided me and shared his pas experience. While discussing with him and the getting understand from him, I forgot the reason also why I was sad.
In my view, I would suggest you that you should take guidence from your seniors and also ask your seniors or other office collegues wherever you find difficulties, I am confident on you that you will be able to cope-up with the new environment soon. Once you familiar with the environment then I am sure you will enjoy your work life too.
Thanks and Regards,
Praful Shah
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| 2019-02-02 | Praful Shah | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'joined'.
Suggestion: joined
... happy to hear about you that, you have join a multination company which is currentl...
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Line 5, column 576, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gelled'.
Suggestion: gelled
...e collegue and office seniors, now I am gel with the organisation culture. One day...
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Line 5, column 908, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asks'.
Suggestion: asks
...n to the chair which was next to me. He ask me about my problem and as he was the f...
^^^
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... cope-up with the new environment soon. Once you familiar with the environment then ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, while, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.48453608247 294% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 5.05154639175 436% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 83.0 32.9175257732 252% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 26.3917525773 235% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 24.0 3.85567010309 622% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 937.175257732 212% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 454.0 206.0 220% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38325991189 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 3.78020617076 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.716565464 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 127.690721649 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436123348018 0.622605031667 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 290.88556701 221% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8298980113 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.736842105 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8947368421 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158185865689 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516382724021 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702993409 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128657157465 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875507102305 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.