Computers are being used more and more in education.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

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Computers are being used more and more in education.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, computers are vastly used in schools and colleges for educational purposes. Some of the institutes encourage students to use computers for their assignments and practical work. This essay will discuss the potential advantages and disadvantages of the computer in an educational system.

To begin with, the prime advantage of using computers for study is that it is the most efficient and quickest way to inquire about anything. Furthermore, the students will be able to find ton of information online on a selected topic. For instance, Google is one of the most common search engines which can provide the necessary information on a selected topic. So, the computers, as a result of this, have became an encyclopedia of knowledge which proved to be quite useful during recent times.

The main disadvantage of using computer in educational facilities is the overuse of this technology. The excessive use of it can be detrimental to the eye vision which in turns lead to several health issues. For instance, the kids, sometimes, spend most of the time sitting in front of the screen which could make them lazy. As a result of this, these children might end up suffering from social instability in the near future.

Thus, with above in mind, we can conclude that the computers can act as boon or bane depending upon the usage . In my opinion, the positives of computer usage in schools outweigh the drawbacks caused by it as it can be quite effective method for learning.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, thus, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05241935484 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83176105337 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.3764446422 49.4020404114 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.3846153846 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193646190427 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073734420368 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562402044898 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120109611053 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423620331972 0.056905535591 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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