Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
A few people express the significance of maintaining the house and even their professional ambit perfectly organised and tidy. I too personally believe that a neat environment would certainly make the whole world a better place to dwell in and during the course of the essay I shall further justify my claims through relevant examples.
My strongest validation supporting my view in the favour of keeping your home organised, as for a housewife a tidy home would definitely be time saving, as a disorganised place may consume most of her precious time in searching for important items of day to day use, that is lying around carelessly in a messy house. Furthermore, keeping the place tidy would increase house wife’s efficiency and thereby, would certainly enable her to multitask, as nowadays most housewives are career oriented and properly organised house requires less struggle cleaning up and even maintaining a decent home. So give her ample time to shuffle between both her home life and work life with utmost grace. So definitely a properly maintained house reduces the upkeep cost and of course, in addition it boosts positive vibes.
My other strong validation in favour of keeping your own work place properly organised would truly reflect upon your organisation, and even would go a long way in helping you meet your targets in today’s competitive in a stipulated time. That’s why so many bosses of late are taking the help of business planners, strategist and even life coaches who come up with fantastic suggestions to meet the requirements of running a highly functional workplace with minimal efforts and optimal gains. For example, in many business houses the bosses come with clear instructions that their staff should first organise their tables properly before resuming work. No matter how busy or stressed they are and even if they have reached late to work, because then their workers will start doing it out of habit. Since, this kind of scheduling and structuring your work place comes with guaranteed success.
To summarize, the prominence of keeping things in proper place and even in a proper manner can never be gainsaid as it comes with maximum benefits, be it in your house or even in your work environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...le world a better place to dwell in and during the course of the essay I shall further justify my cl...
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Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to clean'.
Suggestion: to clean
... organised house requires less struggle cleaning up and even maintaining a decent home. ...
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Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...keeping things in proper place and even in a proper manner can never be gainsaid as it comes with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, well, as for, for example, in addition, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0725 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73984374554 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5575 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9323205315 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.928571429 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403466684729 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17426576716 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.225446201611 0.0667982634062 338% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32342470336 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.269361322815 0.056905535591 473% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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