"Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives.
What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?
There is no doubt that young people are becoming victim of the hectic routines of life such as social, educational and economic. In this essay, I will contend the key reasons behind this new trend and try to bring some solutions for this dark cycle.
“Children are the next generation, so they need to be advanced and formidable contender for the globe”, this has become a motto of every family. Parents insist their child to get good grades, show extraordinary skills and grasp the world knowledge and skills. For example, in India, last year a five year old child became popular on televisio...
- In the past many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repair to things in the house IN many countries nowadays skills like these are disappearing Why do you think this change is happening How far is this situation true to your coun 76
- Topic: It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience. 80
- Task 2 : Parent should restrict the time which their child spend on TVS and computer games, and should make their children use that time for reading books. Do you agree of disagree? 80
- In many countries young people don t choose the teaching profession What do you think is the reason What could be done to attract more students 63
- Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card However some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back In your opinion do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages 83
such skills matters
such skills matter
Sentence: Although, academically intelligence is equally necessary, to accomplish this, the little ones could be indulged into a schedule in their favour of all fundamental needs including their interest rather to pressurize them to go on one way only.
Description: The fragment , academically intelligence is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace academically with adjective
although intelligent children are the pillar of the society, but for this...
Description: Don't put although and But in one sentence.
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