Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behaviour while others say the amount of time children they spend watching Tv influences their behavior.
Nowadays, the TV has become an inevitable part of our daily life. TV is considered as the fast way to find out about news, information and the convenient source of entertainment. There is an argument about the effect of TV watching on children behavior, with regard to the amount of time and the content of TV programs. In my point of view, both of the mentioned aspects are able to impact the viewer’s behavior negatively.
First of all, there is no doubt that there are several TV programs that are not appropriate for children, such as some kind of movies that consist of violence or sexual content. According to a plenty of psychological research, those inappropriate materials have some detrimental effects on the children’s attitude. poor academic performance or even commiting crime are some of negative consequence that are associated with this issue. Therefore, parent play a key role to control the content of those programs which their children used to watch.
On the other hand, the amount of the time that children spend on watching TV brings a new set of concerns with it, because it contribute to the amount of other activities that they should do. Taking physical exercise is an outstanding instance which would reduce significantly. As a result, not only the risk of diseases such as obesity or diabetes will boost, also, the social interaction of children decreased dramatically. They will spend less time with peer and their interpersonal interaction skills never promote that leads to some psychological disorder such as depression or anti- social behaviors.
Taking everything into consideration, it seems that TV watching can result in some detrimental effects on children behaviours, however it could be an educational tool. The amount of time that children spend on TV watching and also, the content of programs should be controlled carefully by parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18892508143 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04027997333 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553745928339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5516296018 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.785714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369068719415 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120416322624 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973774644327 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225666814298 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331785445702 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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