Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers' performance should be evaluated by students rather than by other teachers.
No one cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that teachers play a significant role in society, so, it is important that they should be assessed. A controversial question is often raised regarding this issue that whether teachers performance should be evaluated by students rather than by other teachers or not. Some experts argue that the students cannot evaluate their teacher and they mention that most of the students are disagree with teachers that assign a huge of assignments and test for them, to support their viewpoints. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that students should be assessed with their students rather than other teachers and I support my viewpoint with three reasons.
First of all, all of the teachers have diverse principles for their work and they think that they utilize the best technic and they benchmark own believes for evaluate other teachers. Then, they cannot have accurate judgment. On the other hand, students can evaluate their teacher accurately, because they can compare the performance of teachers and according to own learning in the class, have the best assessment. For example, In the last year, the committee of the university decided to hang out one of the professor of university based on the evaluation of the other professors, while, the professor was the best performance on aspect of students and this decision faced with so many protests and students persuaded the committee to neglect this decision. Therefore, students can assess their teacher's comparison with other teachers.
Furthermore, it is possible that teachers evaluate each other base on competition and in this way, valuation is so inefficient, but students have not any competition with their teacher and have accurate judgment. For instance, one of our teachers is so famous and kind among students and all of the students tried to get one course with him, but he was not accepted as a formal teacher in our school, because other teachers were discontent with the presence of him. Thus, the teacher decided to leave school and after one year we heard that he was detected as the best teacher in the whole of the country. If he had not high performance, he could not have been the best teacher just after one year. Hence, the evaluation of other teachers is not reliable rather than the assessment of students.
Last but not least, if students are aware that the accurate evaluation is so far beneficial for themselves because their assessment influence on the administrator that whether opts the same teacher for next semester or not. Since the students can assess teachers rationally. In addition, other teachers cannot observe the performance of their co-workers nearly in the class and some significant behaviors of the teacher such as teaching, leading the class, and making a proper relationship with students. For instance, we had the so professional teacher last year and the accurate evaluation from students gotten rise to we passed another course with him.
To sum up, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to the fact that students can evaluate their teacher rather than other teachers. However, some people assert that students assess their teacher base on their interest, no rationally, I still believe that even the interest of students indicates the high performance of the teacher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2777.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 543.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11418047882 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73878770947 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.412523020258 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 834.3 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.72621557 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.85 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.15 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362090976733 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150680873385 0.076458572812 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09068968362 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248807615259 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769280052232 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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