Describe advantages and disadvantages of zoos.
Over the few past decades, the idea of preserving animals inside zoos has become a hotly debated concern among masses and there is a confusing statement that if zoos are meant to help or to hurt the wildlife creatures. This essay outlines certain arguments towards above-mentioned assertion in the looming paragraphs.
To begin with, certain animals such as leopard, Lion, and polar bear are at the verge of extinction. Therefore, government bodies are trying their hard to preserve these species in artificial habitats. Furthermore, according to a survey conducted at Indian wildlife preservation centers concluded that over the past 10 years the population of earlier represented breeds has increased by dint of preservation measures. In addition, timely vaccinations and proper medical care are also the principal advantages of being kept inside zoos.
By contrast, despite discussing certain positive outcomes, there are a few contradicting outcomes as well. Primarily, giant and powerful creatures like elephants and lions find their freedom at stake, and therefore, their health suffers. Moreover, at the different parts of the world, some zoos management have been experimenting on few poor animals in a cruel way such as wild monkeys, snakes in-order to ensure the outcomes of certain medicinal effects which literally kill them with brutality.
In conclusion, after discussing the aforementioned argumentative segments I strongly believe that there are numerous undeniable advantages of animal preservation; however, its darker side should never be neglected.
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- The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? 77
- Describe advantages and disadvantages of zoos. 11
- The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'zoos'' or 'zoo's'?
Suggestion: zoos'; zoo's
... the different parts of the world, some zoos management have been experimenting on f...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a cruel way" with adverb for "cruel"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... been experimenting on few poor animals in a cruel way such as wild monkeys, snakes in-order t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66101694915 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05920465524 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690677966102 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5184005161 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.6 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.25397266985 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0542111441173 0.242375264174 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0228013252007 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516660403764 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0330128305193 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03331419161 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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