A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Sam,
I was so relieved when you agreed to take care of my home and my pet, while I am away on the business trip. I understand that you work on your assignments during late nights, so to help you a little I have kept supplies of frozen snacks and groceries in the refrigerator.
You can call me on my cell phone or drop me text in case of any emergencies. Additionally, I have written down the contact details of my hotel, Ginger, on the note pad in the study. You can leave a message at the hotel reception in case I do not respond to call.
Dog food is kept in the cabinet over the refrigerator and Jack, the dog needs to be fed handful of the feed, thrice a day with a gap of 6 hours. He is quite obedient and will not bother you while you work. Additionally, let him out in the lawn as per your convenience and he will play with his ball.
Regarding the daily chores, please put the garbage in the trash can outside the gate, water the outdoor plants daily and indoor plants every alternate day. There’s nothing much to do on regular basis since I cleaned the house and the lawn over the weekend.
Thank you for all the support and feel at home. Will call you once, I leave back for home.
Wishes,
Alison
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ular basis since I cleaned the house and the lawn over the weekend. Thank you ...
^^
Line 14, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... leave back for home. Wishes, Alison
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28085106383 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38778390906 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604255319149 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5984908267 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195799945817 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624099806934 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509180157617 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993487722337 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658603904955 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.