You decided to drive a bicycle to work and do not have parking space available. Write a letter to building manager:
Why you decided to use bicycle
What is the problem
Provide some suggestions.
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing to report some problems in the parking lot where I park my bicycle closest to our work place.
As you know, our company location is in the center of the city, and this area is usually crowded in day time due to a lot of commuters. I was driving to work daily by my car, but I realized that bicycle is the best option to commute instead. Therefore, I bought a brand-new bicycle last week for commuting to avoid checking in late at work.
A parking lot is available just outside our building, and the ticket of bicycle is very cheap comparable to the car parking fee. There are many available lockers for bicycles; however, I noticed that some do not properly work and are damaged. In addition, the locker`s keys are getting stuck in the machine, and sometimes I could not open it.
Our company has a reserved packing area beside the building, and it is always empty from the cars. I would, therefore, request that you discuss this matter with our administration department, and that you advise them to allow me park in this designated parking. It will be a very great help from you to me in avoiding such daily problems with the current parking lot of my bicycle.
I look forward to receiving the administration approval.
Yours sincerely,
Ayoub Khan
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|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-02-11 | abhisheksaxena | 87 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e current parking lot of my bicycle. I look forward to receiving the administ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, therefore, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68695652174 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63485435402 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582608695652 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4315220513 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187973314152 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601697192421 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496033003483 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986557136521 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558774404436 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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