A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Thank him/her for invitation,
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him/her about other times to visit
Dear Haris,
I’m writing to say my thanks to you for your cordial invitation. Unfortunately, I’m sorry that I can’t get there due to my hectic study schedule.
let me tell you more about it. My last exams of semester are due next week. I’m really hoping to get good grades to meet my parent’s expectations. I have already been experiencing some difficulty in my final project and I need to cope up with it. I am working around the clock and most of my time is spent in library searching good articles related to my main project. I’m disappointed to deny your invitation.
I wonder if you are free this summer. I’ll be free because of my summer holidays. We can plan something exciting. Summer time in Canada is great to visit around the country. Also, we’ll both have no pressure of work due to summer holiday and we’ll enjoy it more profoundly.Please let me know if you are okay with proposed time. I’m sure we’ll make most of it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
yours sincerely,
Sumayya
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- A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,Thank him/her for invitation,Explain why you cannot comeAsk 61
- ou have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...there due to my hectic study schedule. let me tell you more about it. My last exam...
^^^
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: Summer
...lidays. We can plan something exciting. Summer time in Canada is great to visit around the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Please
...and we'll enjoy it more profoundly.Please let me know if you are okay with propos...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... I look forward to hearing from you. yours sincerely, Sumayya
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8729281768 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88807101425 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651933701657 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4766072871 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.125 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3125 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135725991905 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605593446431 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077377067646 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982646721965 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395295697914 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.78 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.