The diagram below shows process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Brick manufacturing
The diagram illustrates how to produce bricks in detailed steps in the building industry
At the begining,clay is dug up by a digger , and the final step is delivered it after 5 steps.
At the initial stage , the raw materila which is clay has to be dug up by a digger.The lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in oder to break up the big chunks into much smaller areas and fall through the metal grid onto a roller is the second stage.Sand and water are added to make a homogenous mixture that will be formed in a mould or cut into smaller brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter.
Those fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24 hours and maxium of 48 hours.The dried bricks are then transferred to a so-called kiln.sort of high temperature oven.First, they are kept at a moderate temperature of 200-1300.This process is followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48-72 hours in a cooling chamber.Once the bricks have cooled down and done , they will be packaged and delivered to their final destination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the begining,clay is dug up by a digger , and the final step is delivered it afte...
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... it after 5 steps. At the initial stage , the raw materila which is clay has to b...
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...ch is clay has to be dug up by a digger.The lumps of clay are placed on a metal gri...
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...all through the metal grid onto a roller is the second stage.Sand and water are a...
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...grid onto a roller is the second stage.Sand and water are added to make a homogenou...
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...t least 24 hours and maxium of 48 hours.The dried bricks are then transferred to a ...
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...lled kiln.sort of high temperature oven.First, they are kept at a moderate temperatur...
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...t at a moderate temperature of 200-1300.This process is followed by cooling down the...
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...ks for 48-72 hours in a cooling chamber.Once the bricks have cooled down and done , ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, then, as to, at least, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53191489362 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74653118827 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590425531915 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 22.4926829268 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.361268293 43.030603864 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 284.0 112.824112599 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.6666666667 22.9334400587 273% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.3333333333 5.23603664747 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17939285141 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111661807345 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461428272603 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103926194293 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822996522405 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 13.2329268293 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.47 61.2550243902 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.3012195122 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.9970731707 244% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.