It has recently been announced that a movie theater may be built in your neighborhood.do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Advantages and disadvantages of the construction of a movie theather has been a debated issue in the community lately while some people claim that it has some significant risks .Others maintain that it has a number of undeniable benefits .Although both sides have several pros and cons. I am of the opinion that the construction of movie theather offers numerous variety for social life and easy for transportation advantages that shouldn’t be ignored. I will elvcidate the details of my support with some tongible detail and examples in the following paragraphes.
The construction of a movie theather in the neighborhood offer several social activities .İt always provides to let know about current impressions.People wants to have fun after busy work. İf the construction of a movie theather has been in their neighborhood . They can go easy whenever they want . Moreover they have chance to meet both new poeple and many famous people .Therefore I am totaly support of the construction of a movie theather in neighborhood.
Furthermore ,The construction of movie theather brings about transportation facilities.The goverment provides variety of transport for the public to go to the theather.Thus people who live to close to the theather ,they can benefit from the transportation opportunities .They can easily go to work by bus or train or metro ,etc. For this reason the movie theather can be built in the neighborhood .
On the other hand some people believe that the construction of a movie theather in the neighborhood may triggered some problems.According to them ,many people will visit the neighborhood for watching the theather .So there will be noise.People who live in there may be uncomfortable .Moreover they may have parking problems .because of crowded.However ,I am totally at varience with these assertions the construction of movie theather provides many opportunities . The goverment will be planning how to avoid noise, how to solve parking problems they will arrange parking spaces.
In conclusion , the construction of a movie theather in neighborhood have advantages and disadvantages for people .However It brings about many opportunities for people . Absolutely I support that the construcion of movie theather is built in neighborhood .
- Students at a university often have o choice of places to live.Some students choose to live in university dormitories.Others choose to live in apartments in the community .Where ould you prefer to live ?Give reasons and specific details to support your pr 3
- Students at a university often have o choice of places to live.Some students choose to live in university dormitories.Others choose to live in apartments in the community .Where ould you prefer to live ?Give reasons and specific details to support your pr 75
- Students at a university often have o choice of places to live.Some students choose to live in university dormitories.Others choose to live in apartments in the community .Where ould you prefer to live ?Give reasons and specific details to support your pr 75
- It has recently been announced that a movie theater may be built in your neighborhood.do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 68
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39718309859 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41084944835 2.67179642975 128% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456338028169 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.494406499 48.9658058833 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.384615385 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.5376344086 758% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151746472155 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08853357383 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748621934598 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103088886285 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166323276671 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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