Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Nowadays, the environment is facing a huge threat in daily routine. Some believe that certain
practices made by </span><span class="hiddensuggestion">individuals</span> are useless <span class="hiddensuggestion">whereas</span>, governments and <span class="hiddenspellerror">MNC</span> will be <span class="hiddengrammarerror">making a difference</span>. This essay will state why I disagree and will discuss how <span class="hiddensuggestion">individual
efforts</span> will <span class="hiddensuggestion">contribute</span> to the matter. <span style="font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; font-size: 14.5pt;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">To begin with,service starts from </span><span class="hiddensuggestion">mankind</span>. A small effort
can make a huge impact. Individuals can promote new habits in educating their
friends and families about practices that can help to save the environment.
Governments can still spread awareness about the recent issue that <span class="hiddengrammarerror">is being faced</span> but, still it lies in the hands of one to <span class="hiddensuggestion">implement</span> it. A recent survey states, activities that <span class="hiddengrammarerror">are promoted</span> by government and private organizations are not communicated effectively and has less than 25 percent of followers.</p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">On the other hand, Individuals develop the habit of following friendly practices to </span><span class="hiddensuggestion">preserve</span> the environment. They also have set an example to others by explaining what difference <span class="hiddengrammarerror">can be</span> made when everyone adapts to that practice. For example, many have started to carry cloth bags to shops to avoid plastic bags which is non-biodegradable and has eventually led to lesser production. Companies can help by planting trees around its premises and by providing contracted buses
for their employees. <span style="font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; font-size: 14.5pt;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">From the
above, it </span><span class="hiddengrammarerror">can be</span> seen that <span class="hiddensuggestion">individuals</span> can set the start for an impact <span class="hiddensuggestion">in order to</span> <span class="hiddensuggestion"></span><span pre="to " style="cursor: default;">preserve</span> the environment.
Though companies can also make efforts it still lies on the hands of one to
adapt to the practice and make difference. This essay has discussed how <span class="hiddensuggestion">individuals</span> could set an example and why I disagree with the above idea.<o:p></o:p></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , service
...round-clip: initial;'>To begin with,service starts from ^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, whereas, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4208.0 1615.20841683 261% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 9.78604651163 5.12529762239 191% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.85984091925 2.80592935109 351% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458139534884 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1095.3 506.74238477 216% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.5 1.60771543086 156% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 302.594259222 49.4020404114 613% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 300.571428571 106.682146367 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.7142857143 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0468563047034 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060414782881 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631135491895 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555021576894 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652156009493 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.0 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -35.11 50.2224549098 -70% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.6 11.3001002004 227% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 40.09 12.4159519038 323% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 40.0 10.7795591182 371% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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