When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive
us">Nowadays, the development of metropolis become faster and faster, while most people hold the view that the high-tech trend kills the traditional custom. From my point of view, there are many benefits in old lifestyles indeed, the technology will bring us to a more-brighter future.
us">On the one hand, traditional custom has huge value which ignored by people. firstly, traditional culture has historic value, sociologist can do researching about how people lived before. For instance, we can find some interesting knowledges by research he origin of festivals such as the Fools day. secondly, the old generations have learnt experiences from the traditional lifestyle. Fathers and mothers have taught young people by that in case of they make a mistake. Even though teenagers would like to search information online, they still learnt a large proportion of knowledges from their old-lifestyle-parents. No doubt, traditional is the crucial part of our life.
us">On the other hand, the pace of life in the modern society increasing year by year. people would like to chase the efficiency which brought by hi-tech. firstly, technology can lower the unemployment rate for the country. On account of Internet companies such as Apple INC. and Microsoft can supply thousands of positions in many countries. secondly, hi-tech can let people become closer by social software. For example, FACEBOOK and What’s APP. Therefore, the hi-tech is inseparable to modern lifestyle.
us">In conclusion, we should cherish the traditional skills and built our new life by using technology.
- Your brother couldn’t join you on a trip that you guys planned. Write a letter to a friend inviting him to join:•explain about the trip•explain why your brother couldn’t make it•giving details about the trip. 73
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, but not local people. Why this is the case? What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 61
- Some people think that advertising on TV is useless and others disagree.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- Shops should give preference in selling local food rather than imported food. Do you agree or disagree. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61224489796 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26906926014 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648979591837 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7973576171 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3888888889 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6111111111 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0839168257817 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254742266586 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405262359594 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654369985142 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488198525476 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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