In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life.
To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays many parents are choosing to send their childer either to a same-sex school or to a co-educational school so according to some children attending a single-sex school can be detrimental to their career. In my opinion, I agree that same-sex school ought to have drawbacks as it will greatly harm an individual future and assist society to be biased.
A good reason an individual's same-sex educations is harmful is that there is a strong possibility of an unsuccessful future career compared to a co-educational student. A child, as an adult, would typically work in an environment with mixed gender but the child had never experience working with the opposite sex at school. It would be difficult for such an individual to showcase their skill set and be successful at their job especially when they have a disagreement with the opposite sex.
Another point to consider is that same-sex school does not promote equality between both genders and consequently resulting in an unbalanced society. The individual fails to receive the same level of education and misses an opportunity to compete against the opposite sex from a young age. Moreover, society then claims one gender to be far superior than the other, thus resulting in an unequal wage at work. Soceity, therefore, treats the inferior gender to be unqualified in multiple areas of life.
In conclusion, single-sex would definetly be harmful to an individual's adult life as well as portray an unbiased society where one sex is considered to be better than the other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
... society to be biased. A good reason an individuals same-sex educations is harmful is that ...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...en claims one gender to be far superior than the other, thus resulting in an unequal...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...ingle-sex would definetly be harmful to an individuals adult life as well as portray an unbias...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10276679842 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95526912231 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.9476978142 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.1 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24253946363 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108506049771 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115574508456 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174352626782 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125665499661 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.