Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Life comes with a lot of complex choices. Of late, many people feel that they have been spoil rotten for choices. I totally agree with this notion that a myriad options makes life more complicated rather than, easy. In this essay I would further, present my argument with plausible examples.
Now to validate my claim in favour of the negative sides of too many varieties to pick from I would like to express my concern that it gets almost impossible for a person to even contemplate as to which goods he should avail of, due a wide selection ranging from different prices, features, to models etc. the same goes for services also simply a range of services capable of suiting our needs. Take for example internet connections services in India are also ranging from, Airtel, Vodafone, Jio, Intel that too with 2g 3g or 4g that with various options of prepaid, post-paid, net billing etc. trying to figure out which package suits your needs the most also would prove to be an arduous task. And by the time the person nails the right package meeting his requirement he has wasted a lot of his precious time and effort.
Another valid reason to corroborate my statement in favour of the havoc played by the number of options to select from. Of late such a big range is making the commoners life way to stressful rather than, easing of the consumer of a particular good or service. Especially while buying even routine items he has to scrutinize, various sizes, colours, textures, styles and even trends. This proves to be too time consuming and even taxing leading to a lot of tedium. Due to these detrimental factors he is being slowly pushed into consumerism like the Americans are currently struggling to get out of the ill- effects of large scale consumerism. Which is being propelled by the wide range of products available, beautifully showcased and even brilliantly advertised. So this wide variety of choices has obviously lead to a delirium state.
There may be, people who could see the possibility of choices as positive development, citing the reasons that it suits customised tastes and preferences of people who are wealthy or fastidious for, it believes in backing such people.
To sum up this exposition, I would just like to add to my belief that too many preferences come with a lot more disadvantages than advantages. So, a minimalistic society could certainly lead to a lot more clarity and even tranquillity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'commoners'' or 'commoner's'?
Suggestion: commoners'; commoner's
... Of late such a big range is making the commoners life way to stressful rather than, easi...
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Line 5, column 811, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'leaded', 'led'.
Suggestion: leaded; led
...s wide variety of choices has obviously lead to a delirium state. There may be, p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85371702638 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67057577978 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4721988029 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.526315789 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146368399107 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468736348075 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490491010032 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924734640633 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063757976381 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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