You are looking for a full-time job and recently you saw a job opening in an advertisement.
Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like to get
and say what experience and skills you have
Hı Carl,
I am really happy to share with you the latest news regarding my present work and am strongly sure that you will not believe them. As I have mentioned before to you that I have started boring of my current job. Therefore , I was looking for a new working environment in which it would provide me opportunities in the future in terms of getting a promotion and having productivity with much more money.
Thanks to my researches , I was invited to an interview to one of the reputed software company that located in city where I live to discuss the description of the job. This was unbelievable chance which I have been waiting for ages. To explain briefly, my duties will involve in following trends of web-sites, increasing market share of the our firm in the Europe and having a meeting with some overseas clients.
The last wish that I'd like to tell that I will really welcome you to the my new home if you have leisure time.
I look forward to hearing positive reply from you in the near future.
All the best.
Kevin.
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| 2019-02-21 | Gokhan_Kurt | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly sure that you will not believe them. As I have mentioned before to you that I h...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rted boring of my current job. Therefore , I was looking for a new working environ...
^^
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...h more money. Thanks to my researches , I was invited to an interview to one of...
^^
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...f web-sites, increasing market share of the our firm in the Europe and having a meeting...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...verseas clients. The last wish that Id like to tell that I will really welcome...
^^
Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
... tell that I will really welcome you to the my new home if you have leisure time. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, if, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59042553191 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52127237807 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622340425532 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3507725415 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8888888889 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247823380639 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977660166271 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745352062808 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15396849153 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549098162866 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.