In many countries, governments have spent a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?
It is irrefutable that the supreme authorities of the nation spent a huge amount of precious money to upgrade internet technology. communication sector will be benefited in this manner and helps the nation resolve various aspects. In my opinion, spending money on such projects beneficial for the current as well as future generations to come.
Connectivity with other people of the nation and to the globe is the urgent need for any nation to have speedy development in various sectors, whether it is environmental monitoring, telephone exchange or any other businesses. Communication in the form of internet is basic needs for all the people involved in this millennium century. Like, to have phone connectivity for calls or message services we must have internet service connected.
Moreover investing in these platforms can make the nation more powerful in terms of bridging the gaps and lope hole of different regions connectivity. Furthermore, Improvement is essential to have better platforms which will help the common people to express their concerns and views on each individual issues and the transparency between people will improve. For illustration, the man using a mobile phone can represent himself on a social platform with the help of internet service on a global scale.
In conclusion, the technology has way more beneficial to the world, as in the same way, the internet is the connecting tool for all the technical devices which will benefit the government agencies as well as to the public in terms of development, advances and transparency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Communication
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... must have internet service connected. Moreover investing in these platforms can make t...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'regions'' or 'region's'?
Suggestion: regions'; region's
...ing the gaps and lope hole of different regions connectivity. Furthermore, Improvement ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24302788845 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02245791061 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565737051793 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0007894682 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.6 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128182027431 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513228074775 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047361013446 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745031308802 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292424956639 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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