Some people feel that entertainers ( e.g. film start, musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? What other jobs should be paid highly?
Popular identities like sports player, musicians, and film celebrities received huge amount of incomes is believed by some individuals. I agree and believe that they are the representative of a country in their particular field therefore they should be get high salaries. In addition to that, medical researchers must receive good financial support from the federal agency.
Popular individuals are paid high salaries because they represent the nation on international level, therefore these individuals should be paid enough wages so that they can focus on their jobs and responsibility only. For instance, a cricket player in world cup tournaments is expected to give maximum contribution in competitions rather than worrying other needs of his daily life, thus these individuals are highly paid to focus in game only. For that reason, authorities take care of their other requirements.
Doctors and scientists are other individuals who should be paid high income because they are the live savers in the world and their jobs cannot be done anyone else. Doctors and scientists spend many years in discovery of medicines against deadly infections to save mankind, thus they deserve to get highly paid. A survey conducted by a medical association in India revealed that since the invention of TB medicine, around 2 lakh people have been treated so far in India only. Hence, these individuals must be supported financially by the government in order to focus them on their profession only.
To recapitulate, although entertainers are paid much more than the other people, years of hardworking is embroiled in getting this spot. Other than entertainers, people who provide essential services, such as Doctor, teachers, should be paid much.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
Popular identities like sports player, musicians, and film celebrities...
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Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'got', 'gotten'?
Suggestion: got; gotten
...rticular field therefore they should be get high salaries. In addition to that, med...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39416058394 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92387476404 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4463270408 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265080691676 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965240710641 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684773151449 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165915421282 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470072854196 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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