Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear sir or Madam,
I write to you in respect of the award for people who have impacted the community with the philanthropic heart.
It's with great pleasure to suggest Sir Alex Ferguson who have helped the community in various ways through his heart for all foundation charity program.
However, with respect to the testimonies obtained from his philanthropic way of life, he has helped the widows in establishing with small scale enterprises which 30% of the widows in the community has benefited from this structure placed by his foundation. Furthermore, a youth empowerment program for skills and acquisition relating to internet communication and technology has been productive whereby 50% of the youth in the community has been able to upgrade their skills to help the community in return with the under privileged.
Although, i would suggest that an award with the inscription of "most touch hands" be conferred on Sir Alex Ferguson for the bountiful blue prints scripted on the heart of the community.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your Faithfully
James Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...with the under privileged. Although, i would suggest that an award with the in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26704545455 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93682953488 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.726995735 44.8134815571 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.428571429 76.5299724578 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204195256601 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977581794563 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577489806296 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119163940669 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727830059649 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 8.62886597938 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.