Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
Neatness is next godliness as said by a school of thought. However, which necessitate the importance of maintaining a healthy home and conducive work place with proper organization to enhance productivity and mental balance. The scope of the above-mentioned would be discussed in the essay.
It’s imperative that both home and workplace be extensively put under check which allows verification and keeps predator away from the surrounding. The tidiness integrates a well balanced mental psychology with right attitude to work in dissipating the duties adequately. Moreover, this school of thought upholds objectively that the right attitude to organization helps the body to be coordinated to produce excellent result at an office environment.
Furthermore, the sense of shipshape depicts a sound mind. This, however, which is essential, drives the notion to be organized through putting things in the right position. This type of nature stimulates mental balances with excellent results at workplace and also healthy coordination. Because an unhealthy attitude to both home and workplace disorganizes productivity, psychological balances, unhealthy relationship at both areas and as such, it makes the person unorganized.
In conclusion, I support the school of thought; however, the cultured organization of putting items in proper position depicts a well –groomed attitude to keeping both home and workplace well-turned out
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81603773585 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26484273943 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589622641509 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6827761834 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.090909091 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141628722005 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511321161723 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416575217479 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924619727502 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00555989872427 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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