You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took
place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that
they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served
for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
say what the participants liked about the hoteil
explain why they were unhappy about the food
suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
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Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Madam,
I'm writing you with respect to the services we received on the 29th of may 2018, at the Cheldon banquet hall at Royal hotels. We were pleased with most of the services, moreover we hope you improve, so as to patronize your hotel in the nearest future.
It's undeniable that the hall was well-organized with amazing sitting area. The breakfast and dinner were sumptuous. However the lunch wasn't up to standard, as it was cold, the presentation was poor. The complimentary drink ordered came in late, and wasn't iced which made it unappealing. Majorities of the attendees at the conference had negative feedback about the lunch.
The lunch was set immediately after breakfast were served, which was the major reason why the lunch served where cold, i presume this can be done by investing into chaffing dishes with heat burner to keep the food continuously warm until demanded. otherwise, a cooler would be an appropriate substitute.
Yours Faithfully,
Eniola.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Madam, Im writing you with respect to the service...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...services, moreover we hope you improve, so as to patronize your hotel in the nearest fut...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...he breakfast and dinner were sumptuous. However the lunch wasnt up to standard, as it w...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...inner were sumptuous. However the lunch wasnt up to standard, as it was cold, the pre...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...mentary drink ordered came in late, and wasnt iced which made it unappealing. Majorit...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...reason why the lunch served where cold, i presume this can be done by investing i...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Otherwise
... food continuously warm until demanded. otherwise, a cooler would be an appropriate subst...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, moreover, so, well, as to, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11180124224 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78416105767 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708074534161 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.166435826 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139336633593 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499953304398 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392601571483 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840536755352 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302066001735 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.