Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
It is clear that living in a foreign country has benefits but there is also drawbacks such as socializing and practical problems. I agree with this idea however, I think that anybody who live in a different country should respect national culture.
People who live in a foreign country can face problem with language barrier, which means that person who coming from other country cannot be able to speak or understand local people. It might cause problem for foreigner and local people. Another problem is manner in socializing, it means people who came to foreign country might insult others with their behaviour. For example, English people are more polite and they are say “sorry” every time but for other nations, it is different. Therefore, a person who does not know how to behave in a special culture may offend others around him.
The first practical problem might be finding a job. A person who works in a serving position cannot be appropriate for people who he serves. For example, if foreigner works as a waiter it can be unlikely for local person who was born in this country because of the different culture. Next practical problem is misunderstanding the local culture. It means in some cases some foreign people cannot understand or do not know local culture and they behave how they want and it can cause misconception.
In conclusion, it can be mentioned that when people live in a foreign country they may face a lot of misunderstanding with local people. From my opinion and own experience I can say that when people move to other country they should respect local culture even know about local people’s behaviour in advance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92882562278 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7578486925 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466192170819 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2167596296 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175838423431 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742541196137 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663358987298 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134167587821 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056888903015 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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