The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and th year after it was refurbished.The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the same two periods.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the amount of people who visit Ashdown museum. while the charts illustrate how satisfy they were before and after refurbishment. In general, when comparing between the time before and the time after the refurbishment complete, there are more visitors, in which increasing from 74000 to 92000 visitors.Also, the rate of people who feel positive about their visit is increasing while the rate of those who feel negative when visit this museum is decreasing.
before the refurbishment the rate distributes as: 15% of visitors feel very satisfied,satisfied visitor is at 30%. These rates increase after the refurbishment complete with 35% very satisfied and 40% satisfied visitors respectively.
On the other hand, the rate of visitors who feel dissatisfied, very dissatisfied decrease. dissatisfied visitor is the highest rate before the museum is refurbished at four tenths fall into 15% and 10%. For those who are very dissatisfied, the rate is only 5% after the refurbishment is completed. The rate of “No” response visitors remain unchanged and account for 5% in both surveys.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47398843931 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23128108547 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537572254335 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 74.390527739 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.222222222 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206437162513 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109493937578 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676102012193 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14671361484 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437038840728 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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