You are planning to give a presentation in your large company. Write a letter to your colleague asking for help. Include:
1) When and where the presentation will be held
2) What is the presentation about?
3) What would you like your colleague to do?
Dear Daniel,
I hope you are doing well. I have been caught up with some planning for presentation and I am writing to seek your help for the same. Allow me to elaborate.
As you know, the annual budget will be presented on February 2nd, 2019 at the Lawson Hotel. It has been quite a hot topic in the recent past and resultant which I have been panicking at almost every stage of planning due to tremendous responsibility on my shoulders.
Moreover, the event does not need any introduction as you are part of the company, but this time around we will be introducing a new funding project for upcoming entrepreneur from our city. There seems to be a surge in the number of start-ups in the city and as such a new project funding is in line.
Furthermore, I have been asked by the management to invite you to host the event. The event will be attended by leaders from big conglomerates and you can make a name for yourself as a great host.
I hope that you will be able to accommodate the request made on behalf of the company.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Daniel, I hope you are doing well. I have been c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49489795918 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66044400568 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8706023339 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0909090909 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276680727614 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976952097205 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677984365602 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141013708531 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656570715752 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.