Cities are often seen as places of opportunity, but there are also some major drawbacks that exist on the living of inhabitants. In my opinion, governments could do much more to enhance the quality of life for residents.
Cities are often seen as places of opportunity, but there are also some major drawbacks that exist on the living of inhabitants. In my opinion, governments could do much more to enhance the quality of life for residents.
The main problem for anyone who hopes to migrate to a large metropolis is that the cost of living is likely higher than it's in a small village. This is because that they have to pay higher prices for housing, traffic and even food. Another is that high crime and growing disparity between the wealthy and the poor. Furthermore, the air pollution is gradually increasing to an alarming level because of emissions from vehicles and industrial zones.
The result is that the city could be unhealthy and stressful with overcrowded conditions.
However, there are various solutions for the government could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, they could subsidize money in the building social housing, providing free education to reduce the cost of living. Secondly, the heavy and huge vehicles should be banned during rush hours to control traffic problem and polluted air. In Ho Chi Minh city, for example, the government has launched the law prohibited car entering the centres of the city from 5 P.M to 10 P.M to curb the traffic jam. The third option would consider a development plan for provincial cities which is near to a mega city to move industrial areas from the centres. This method is able to attract employees who want to look for a job at local.
In conclusion, Governments should implement a range of measures to enhance the standards of living for citizens.
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- Cities are often seen as places of opportunity but there are also some major drawbacks that exist on the living of inhabitants In my opinion governments could do much more to enhance the quality of life for residents 63
- People should follow customs and traditions when start to live in a new country. Do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 461, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...tering the centres of the city from 5 P.M to 10 P.M to curb the traffic jam. The ...
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Line 4, column 471, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
... centres of the city from 5 P.M to 10 P.M to curb the traffic jam. The third opti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91512915129 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64713278699 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608856088561 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0197138763 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399438753656 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127294262126 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189095801311 0.0667982634062 283% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276221141426 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.363578395194 0.056905535591 639% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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