The bar chart below show the percantage of households in rented and owned apartments in England and Wales in 1919 and 2011
The bar chart presents the percentage of families living in owned and rented houses in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. It can be clear that the percentage of families in owned houses has a significant increasing trend in the period of time while that of families in rented accommodation decreased. At the beginning of the period of time, the number of households in rented apartments peaked with about 80%, whereas that of households in owned hit the bottom with about 20%. The proportion of families in owned and rented in 1939 and 1953 have equal was equal, respectively approximately 30% and 70%. The period from 1961 to 2001 witnessed the gradual downward pattern of the proportion of households in rented houses, while that of households in owned houses went up steadily and peaked at 70% in 2011. At the end of the time, the figure of households in rented apartments raised slightly while the number of households in owned apartments decreased inconsiderably.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s a significant increasing trend in the period of time while that of families in rented accomm...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...tion decreased. At the beginning of the period of time, the number of households in rented apa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92073170732 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85414708138 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463414634146 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.5972997948 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330190020042 0.215688989381 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176333230962 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974431169079 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330190020042 0.15604864568 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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