Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both views and give your own opinions
Many people assume that there must be a permanent punishment for several crimes committed. Although most think that there must be a reason and purpose for committing such crime and should be taking into consideration when deciding on their punishment. In my opinion, however, there should be some consideration given to an individual for committing such crime because of the situation they find themselves is uncontrollable.
Firstly,in our country of today there are different kinds of people with different mindset. some people deliberately act in an unpleasant ways because of the kind of friends, people they associate themselves with. For instance, a gang of people in a community going all around raping young girls who are very vulnerable because they belong to a powerful association. In this kind of situation there should be a fixed punishment for such crime because it's a deliberate act.
Secondly, because of the problems of unemployment in our society of today however, there are different people who met themselves in an unforseen circumstance which leads them into bad actions. For example, an unemployed graduate having to take care of his parents and siblings, which his mother is admitted in the hospital arranged for a urgent operation and younger ones going to school without any assistance in payment of their tuition fees and their upbringing. If someone of such people was caught stealing, there should be a consideration when this person is been punished.
In conclusion,nevertheless, there should be a fixed punishment for a deliberate act and also there should be some consideration to be taken for an individual for commit a crime.
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also, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22471910112 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1723752911 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513108614232 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0246286241 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.818181818 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470600667079 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200179553227 0.084324248473 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148132473069 0.0667982634062 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335891784917 0.151304729494 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152233118151 0.056905535591 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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