Subjects such as Art, Sport and Music are being dropped from the school curriculum for subjects such as Information Technology. Many people think children suffer as a result of these changes. To what extent would you support or reject the idea of moving these subjects from school curiculum?
In this day and age, museums are gradually getting more attention of human. Resulting in two opposite opinions, some people consider museums as comfortable places to entertain them, whereas the rest think the ultimate purpose of museums is teach people. I my opinion, i side with the view that museums are a great way to learn and to be educated. This essay will discuss those two views.<br>
On the one hand, according to the former thought, people in this group believe that the aim of museums is recreation. In this contemporary life, people are attracted by fascinating things, such as breath-taking sceneries, critically acclaimed artworks, ... And museums is the place where those things usually take place. Museums are one of the most appealing and beneficial ways for residents to witness a host of nice historical and ancient things, not only allow for adults but also for children to take part in. Visiting museums gives everybody an advantage of watching ancient movies about a range of hictorical events and many brave figures back in the day.<br>
On the other hand, with regard to education, by going to the museums, by getting to know our countries with an assortment of hictorical issues and ancient figures in a deeper and touching way, we can experience a trip that hark back to the past centuries, we may feel more proud of our ascestors and forefathers who had kept the countries independent. It can enhance our care towards sacrifices of many strong fighters and warriors. Museums are not only used for demonstration purpose but also for teaching human beings, teaching via photographs, movies, figures, forefathers, help people to gain more their knowledge about their own history, encourage students to learn history eagerly and actively.<br>
In conclusion, i tend to gravitatate towards the use of education of museums. Going to museums, in general, does wonders for your knowledge and your pride to your nation.<br>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, whereas, in conclusion, in general, such as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12225705329 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80301177308 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592476489028 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.502863812 49.4020404114 262% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.545454545 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0781436503937 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309721138151 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024848276461 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437647480784 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231104363109 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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