Do you agree with the following statement? Patience is not a good strategy, we should take action now rather than later. Give specific reasons or examples for your opinion.
“Have some patience” very common words! We all hear these words very often, when we are in hurry. People use these words, because they believe, work done in hurry could create some problems such as, result of that work would not be good. I believe having patience is good for any work. It always gives correct result, and helps to avoid misunderstanding and mistakes.
First, action or decision taken without thinking is not always correct. Patience includes process of thinking before taking any action or decision. This thinking allows us to think in more than one ways, which help us to f...
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