There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing to draw your attention towards the irregular bus service in my area, which has become an everyday concern for the people availing the facility.
I daily commuted to work using bus number 6 and that had been the best option for me till now due to its perfect arriving time at the bus stop. However, I have observed that since last 15 days the bus do not arrive at its time and I have to wait long. Surprisingly, last Friday bus was not seen even after waiting for 30 minutes and eventually I had to choose other mode of transportation to reach the office. Indeed, this has become a big headache for me as I am getting late to office often. The bus is very irregular these days and I cannot rely on this service. Consequently, many times I need to depend on private transport, which is unequivocally expensive means of travelling on regular basis. In this case; despite the public transport, I get refrained from its benefit. I am sure this would have created many problems for other citizens as well.
I would ask you to take proper action by training the staff such that bus schedule is not disturbed and people can use the bus facility conveniently. I expect that you would do needful at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 151, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... can use the bus facility conveniently. I expect that you would do needful at the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56828193833 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6018651959 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625550660793 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5851245746 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190890324998 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680552358209 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481931434486 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106631686279 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038181872524 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.