Libraries should focus on improving their technological resources rather than in building a large collection of paper books. To what extend do you agree.
Books or technology is the highly debated issue these days, when digital technology has progressed by leaps and bound. Some argue that using advance methods, information can be referred smartly instead of storing large number of books in library; however, in my opinion the world needs both books as well as recent technology to maximize the use of library.
First and foremost, the incoming of modern technology has lead to concept of online learning and e-books, where lot of resources are available on internet. The libraries, therefore, requires to undergo changes by installing modern equipment such as computers, enabling readers to refer the huge reference data over the web. This would certainly help the readers to acquire knowledge and achieve success in their assignments.
However, this does not mean that books should go disappeared in library. There are instances where hard copy certainly helps in reading and all the data available online cannot be assured to be correct; meaning, the books has its indispensable place which cannot be taken by any other means. For instance, my kids would enjoy coloring or solving puzzles in book rather than sitting on computer.
Admittedly, there are benefits of technology as well as hard bind books because both are equally helpful. The internet resources play vital role, allowing reader to have a broader look at the topic along with other people's opinion and reviews on subject. At the same time, the books give accurate reference that is result of author's hard work on research for several years. Thus, both are important.
To sum up, I pen down saying in digitized era, it is essential that libraries pay attention towards ameliorating technological equipment such as computers and internet services. However, books has its place which cannot be taken by other thing; so, books capacity should always be kept adequate for its readers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'undergoing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: undergoing
...net. The libraries, therefore, requires to undergo changes by installing modern equipment ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25407166124 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60948852053 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9219011958 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0983144863024 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350231954041 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287364224294 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053678443046 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138801437514 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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