The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve the crime. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent times, advanced technology is helpful in preventing and solving criminal activities. This essay agrees with this statement because of the improved surveillance and connectivity among people.
To begin with, technology has been enormously useful in improving surveillance all across the globe. Installation of CC cameras along with the infrastructure has been helping the police and the other authorities to constantly have information about any illegal activities. Moreover, people are aware of the fact that they are under constant observation which prevents them from committing any crime. For instance, in 2017 in Hyderabad city in India, the state government had installed around one lakh CC cameras to keep a check on illegal activities. This declined the crime rate to 23% when compared to the previous year. This shows that technology makes a huge impact on the crime rate.
Staying connected irrespective of time and place is one of the major advantages of the technology. People can communicate through call or the internet at any given time. Therefore, information is easily spread within a fraction of seconds. This makes criminals think before they commit unlawful activities. Even though they are involved in particular fraud, technology makes it easier for the police to solve the respective crime. For example, in the year 2015 in Delhi, the capital city of India, 456 sexual assault cases associated with taxis had been reported. But with tracking via GPS, sharing whereabouts of travelers to friends and families have been plummeted the cases to only 23 in 2018. This shows that connectivity with the help of technology helps in lowering the crime rate.
To conclude, technology helps in declining the crime rate not only by improving the surveillance but also by improving connectivity among people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36332179931 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88915525109 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57785467128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0347994172 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1764705882 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20298415427 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070990857154 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750416698371 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13367904063 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217726600531 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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