Education for young people is important in many countries. However, some people think that government should spend more money on education in adult population who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, governments always pay attention to invest educate for young people such as study abroad or provide scholarship. Although I agree with this view, but I assume that social is not balance if governments only focus on young people.
In the one hand, Education for young people is purely crucial in many countries. According to the modern tendency, governments often invest currency for young people due to many aspects. First of all, young people are able to design or innovate especially. People said that the youth often brings numerous opportunities so many chances come to people when they were young. Young people have a lot of time to study or create a new one. Thus, now and again, governments organize many competitions attracting to numerous young people in order to find a good person. For instance, Adobe Certified Associate World Championship 2018 - a competition specialized in designing logo in order to reinforce creative people. Moreover, young people could stand a chance to study abroad and acquire knowledge. In several years, governments provide many scholarships with people who have progress in learning pathway. Scholarships brings not only light-hearted but also motivation. Thus, a large of student receives scholarship to study abroad because they could acquire knowledge more than domestic. Since then, they could upgrade social, even country.
However, I strongly believe that spending more money for young people is not adequate. Governments should pay attention to education for adult population who cannot read and write. That is definitely true based on various reasons. One reason is that raising knowledge for adult means raising the country. When a country has more studying people, the rate of illiterate is decrease strongly. As far as I know, in the previous year, Vietnam government provides studying condition for people coming from remote regions in order to promote their likelihood. Furthermore, adult having intelligence are able to teach their babies. Everyone knows that children development depend on teaching parents. For example, in poor countries in Africa, children often play truant or drop out because their parents do not focus on their learning. So population rate is completely low
In conclusion, governments should spend more money for adult and young people at the same time to create the balance in social
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35561497326 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7682003781 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553475935829 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8722009793 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4583333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54166666667 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399380269111 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112977598443 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108163202507 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255564593827 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388077510131 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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