Children should never be educated at home by their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
Preventing children from education at home could be considered as a deficiency for them from their parents against integrating to society. In some aspects, I couldn't agree with that conception by some several factors.
Parents, in majority, afraid that kids are taught at home could probably be isolated from community generally as well as facing some social difficulties in integrating to social relationship. Those children, however, would be the objects who are easily suffering bullying, violent in school or even meet pedophile in where they are taught. Moreover, when children is on the few first years of education, new things, new friends and discoveries in school will attract them instead of studying. Gradually, at the end of semester, the transcript from them could shock their parents because of their neglect to lectures.
on the other hand, in some minor families, some modern parents would chose the closing method in interacting with their children will be the intimate approach to their lovable ones. By doing this, young people may discover their child's hidden talents, create opportunities for their self-growing or challenging to beyond their limitations. For instance, the Physicist - Albert Einstein was rejected to continue his education programme in school because of his deeply slow development. His mother was called to meet the principle who underestimated scornfully her son. After rejection, his greatest mother was trying hardly to educate him by her own in spite of numerous difficulties and troubles. And now - Einstein is recognized respectfully as the greatest physicist who sacrified various discoveries and theories to human kind of all eras.
Instead of spending time to play and train for their children, many young parents nowadays choose to send their kids to school and let her lecturers monitors them because of their busy life. i would strongly disagree with this circumstance and our children should enjoy a fully of love, caring and responsibility environment to their offsprings.
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, kind of, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44794952681 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95808847708 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589905362776 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.7829762099 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.916666667 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281791781242 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844858850173 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631816199445 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164568069739 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209967168368 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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