Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss
Internationalization helped many countries to develop in terms of industrialization. While, global proliferation has impacted the universal economic growth positively, it also has some negative effects. This essay will discuss about the pros and cons of globalization.
Worldwide development has catered the needs of unemployment, financial development of the nations. Because the globalization has initiated many organizations in the emerging markets, the number of jobs has been increased. For instance, many top multi-national companies have set up their manufacturing units in the developing areas providing employment in that place. Furthermore, international expansion has helped the technology to expand into different regions, because of which many nations developed economically. Although, only some part of the people in the country gets benefited by the globalization, the average income of the region improves leading to economic growth. For example, in India the percentage of educated is increasing year on year due to Internationalization, which in turn helps in driving the economy over the forecast period. Therefore, some of the positive effects of global enhancement are employment generation and economic development.
Although, global proliferation is advantageous, there are certain disadvantages like force let down of prices and job insecurity in the developed markets. Due to the availability of the products at lesser price, few manufacturers have to reduce their price to survive in the competition. As an example, China is offering products at very low cost which has a negative impact in the companies internationally leading to decreasing the price of the products. As the people in emerging countries work for fewer wages, the advanced nations are facing the job security issues. In the developed regions the salary would be relatively higher which is making the organizations to rely more on the developing places. Hence, the drawbacks of globalization are reduction in prices of goods and lack of secured jobs.
Hence, the globalization has certain advantages like solving the unemployment issue in the emerging places along with their economic development. But there are few cons like forceful reduction of cost of commodities and scarcity of job security in developed regions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 867, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...my over the forecast period. Therefore, some of the positive effects of global enhancement ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71387283237 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47912659947 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549132947977 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7842656779 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0800717806514 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263226585219 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274042119624 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511979665951 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195471385787 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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