If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
The author believes that if the goal is worthy then any means taken to attain or fulfill are justificable. The author warrents that taking any means whether fair of bad to fulfill worthy dreams are justificable. but on contrary i do not believe with the idea and view of the author rather i believe that one should be ethical and always choose the correct path and held good motive and patha to achieve that worthy dream. We should be always be loyal and hardworking. no matter how difficult to achieve that worthy goal ultimate hardwork and dedication leads us to the place of apex. It may require time and resource when marching in a good path, taking a correct and nice path will be always difficult but the attainment that it brings is a moment of reward. those who have achieved their goal through cunning way cannot value their goal.
There is no shortcut for success. only hardwork dedication and long trying leads to the success. one should not get into wrong track for achieving owns goal. There exist families who have gone serious debts and are insolvent to pay debt, that they burrowed for easy fulfillment of the goals. There are many people in jails for their fraud trickery and deceive for attainment of their goals. People who are in underworld and do busisness of drugs and illigal things might earn money and achieve the success. but they are always in the eve of government and constantly living in the threat. it is better to live in peace than to indulge ownself in illigal things for the sake of ephemeral success and attainment of crafty goals.
everyone has their own goals for example student might have goal of securing good academics, sportsman might have goal of getting winning gameplay with awards, politicvians might mhave goal of aquaring high posts in the government and ruling the nation. But what would happen if everyone involves in bad track to attain the succes??? There exists a disharmony and chaos in the society. so to control and held harmony in society there exists rules laws and moral principles.
One would say worthy goals are hard to fulfill and it is desirable that attainment of such goals through any means is justificable posing an example of Pable Escobar of mexico. But one should never forget how Pablo Escober ended in life, what sorts of hurdles, did he faced and what did ho lose. People may also gicve and example of Maradona Who brought worldcup trophy to argentina shooting the disputatious goal with his hand. Sometimes such situation arise but everytime this cannot be done and its was an instanteneous reflex not done delibrately. futher reaching semifinals means that the team is deserving finals. moreover one should not forget that hardship and difficulties that he had done for footballand his country.
Thus to sum up i would like to restate that no matter how difficulty and tiring one should alwauys focus and be on right path and involved trying until attainment of the goal and also rememeber that ther is no shortcut of success. The goal becomes fruitful only wehen we achieve through dedication and hardwork. respect is not granted it is earned through positive path with lots of hurdles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 37.0 14.8657303371 249% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2624.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 545.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81467889908 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44919009268 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48623853211 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 803.7 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7281042256 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7142857143 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4642857143 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214550458572 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567487907592 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096161915878 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114248289168 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531222099777 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.