People attend both work and personal calls through mobile phone anytime of the day. What are the positive and negative effects on social and individual life?
It is an undeniable fact that mobile phones are considered as a key element of effective communication. Individuals consider that it is useful to attend professional as well as private calls anywhere and anytime. There are several benefits and has some contemplating pitfalls too.
On the one hand, it helps to minimise geographical barriers. To elaborate, one can easily interact with their loved ones using phones which will help them to stay connected with each other and it strengthen their bond. In addition, it plays an important role in productivity. For example, if there is any issue at work, one can instantly connect with team and can resolve it without being present physically at workplace. Also, owing to it, individuals can use in-built applications available in phone which can serve many purposes like, it is helpful for emergency dialling if any destruction caused by fire.
On the other hand, it can take away your social life. In a recent article in ‘The Times’ newspaper it was shown that people who are constantly on cellular phone pay less attention towards family members and hence, it has severe impact on family relationship. Furthermore, excessive usage of it has detrimental effects on health. The waves emitted cause several fatal diseases like cancer. Also, it would be dangerous to be on call while driving because, driver might lose concentration and it could lead to an accident.
To sum up, although there are negative impacts of overusing cell phones which are severe as it has impact on health, there are benefits which are undeniable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'strengthens'?
Suggestion: strengthens
...o stay connected with each other and it strengthen their bond. In addition, it plays an im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86678951678 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644787644788 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8186102414 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143623706494 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449543864271 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427403890132 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878422081981 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438673187669 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.